This review will contain a spoiler section marked with spoilers. The first part is spoiler free.
The beginning is quite fast paced, immediately dropping you into the world. From there, everything pretty much falls apart. From my understanding, the Romans came from our time and into Ruying’s world. The fact that Ruying’s world was colonized is apparent from the beginning (so is the fact that the prince is evil to the reader).
Ruying is the main character and she has the power to kill people with her touch. Her best friend, Baihu, is working for the Romans. She is discovered by the prince Antony who forces her to kill his enemies for him. Antony is quite obviously evil to the reader from the beginning, and I think Chang wants us to see how naive Ruying is from the start, but again there is no character development until the very end. I also did not like the romance between them either – Antony is extremely creepy.
I found myself wishing Ruying had more of a spine – I almost wish we followed Meiya, her sister’s story – I suspect Chang wanted us to follow a character who was on the journey of joining the rebellion, but it takes a while (the whole book almost) to realize that she needs to stand up for what she believes in rather than thinking she can work within the system of colonization and imperialism of the Romans – this did not make for a good story and instead made it seem like they wanted the reader to root for Antony (when again, Antony is a colonizer). Again, this did not work out as nearly the entire book focuses on Ruying’s selfishness and how she ignores what everyone else says about Antony except for Antony.
I find myself gravitating to stories where the rebellion against colonization is more apparent, or the main character already knows/is strong in their beliefs. I think R.F. Kuang does a good job of this in The Poppy War trilogy, and N.E. Davenport in The Blood Trials, and Melissa Blair in A Broken Blade. I wish Ruying had more solid beliefs, or her induction into the rebellion introduced earlier. For example, if she’d been working for the rebellion from the start I think that would have worked better.
Overall, the execution of the story fell short of my expectations (my expectations were already nil after reading reviews before reading the book). The commentary on colonization and imperialism was not there. If you’re looking for a fantasy novel with a main character who fights for her beliefs and that calls out colonization and imperialism, read any of the above mentioned in the previous paragraph. Apparently, the second book is being marketed as “anti-colonial,” but after such a lackluster start I will not be reading the second one.
Spoiler Section
This book was advertised incorrectly. It should never have been marketed as an enemies to lovers romance. Also, by the end Taohua – Ruying’s only female friend other than her sister and grandmother – is killed in the biological warefare prisons. How are there still a lack of female friendships in a fantasy novel?
Ruying has a lot of learning to do, and she refuses to listen to her best friend, who she’s known way longer than Antony, once Baihu tells her about the biological warfare prisons. There seemed to be more exposition needed or background on the friendship between Baihu and Ruying. Also, this section really drives home the reviewers who critiqued the book as an ARC (these quotes below are still in the final copy):
“Baihu chuckled, shook his head. ‘You really have no idea what Antony is like, do you? What he’s done? What he and his scientists are doing to our people?”
“You’re right. I don’t know what he’s doing, not in detail. And frankly, I don’t give a damn.” (Said by Ruying)
Then on the next page:
“Do you ever wonder what happened to the people who didn’t pass the Exhibition? Do you know what they are doing to our people in-” (Said by Baihu)
“I don’t know. And quite frankly, I don’t care.” (said by Ruying)
How are you saying “I don’t care” when you, Ruying, recognize the destruction of the world because of the Romans? Why are you unwilling to listen to your friend? By the end, Ruying does choose the side of the revolution, but it just felt so careless to not have more about the revolution. I am not sure why Ruying kept cutting Baihu off either. I would have liked to see a story where Ruying starts out on the revolution’s side and works with Taohua to take down the prisons.
Did any books you read this year disappoint you?